My concept CD

[apple pie]

edit: it sucked

[sexymuffin]

There really doesn't seem to be any rhythm at all to the lines. Most the rhymes are forced and some are the same word.

Song three has some lines in it that don't really make any sense. Referencing to the hood is usually a bad thing to do in anything but rap music.

It also gets very redundant. Just describing the same idea over and over again with different words. I really don't see how you could make an interesting concept album revolving around Kurt Cobain. Maybe a song, but an entire album would get boring.

[masada]

there's already a boring concept album revolving around kurt cobain: Nevermind.

[Seafroggys]

Concept CD? They're called Concept Albums!

Anyway, your story needs to be original. Something along the lines of a kid witnessing his father killing his mother's lover after returning from a war, going blind, losing his hearing, and becoming mute, then becomes a pinball champion. After that he regains his eyesight by his mother smashing the mirror, and he becomes a messiah, before his followers can't take it anymore and tear him apart.

And you can use that story if you want. :lol:

[sexymuffin]

there's already a boring concept album revolving around kurt cobain: Nevermind.

:lol: