Loathing for your Kindred

[Thasis]

Hello, I am the lead vocalist, bass guitarist, and song writer for the Symphonic Black Metal band Black Mantra. We're just starting, but I'm not new to writing lyrics for songs or writing anything related to poetry. Here is a song called Loathing for your Kindred:

Loathing for your Kindred

Dragged from the womb of hatred,
Bleeding from every pore,
Stalked until the end of time,
No remorse for my love.

Nailed to the post of time,
Forgotten but ever present,
Crucified at soul and mind,
Bound to the last moments of breath.

No time for compassion,
Only hatred consumes you,
No remorse from those who loved you,
Only loathing for your kindred.

Crying in the torture of your soul,
Ever lustful even in my last moments,
The kiss of Judas mocking my cause,
The kiss of Judas mocking my humanity.

No time for compassion,
Only hatred consumes you,
No remorse from those who loved you,
Only loathing for your kindred.

The last gasp of aversion trapped in my chest,
Only confusion to comfort my soul in sorrow,
Nothings left except pain and one thousand agonies,
A worthless eternity of suffering soon ahead.

No time for compassion,
Only hatred consumes you,
No remorse from those who loved you,
Only loathing for your kindred.

[slowgunner]

My problem with this is that the anger comes out, but not the saddness that must accompany that emotion.