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DylanYoung
06-20-2006, 03:59 PM
I was trying to improve the quality of my guitar recording, so I recorded some riff thing. I liked it, and wanted to do more with it, but everything sucked.

Maybe some suggestions? Or maybe just use it as and intro for (an) the album?

http://www.purevolume.com/dylanyoung

(the song is named: what to do with this? )

:)

knowndebaser1
06-20-2006, 09:52 PM
i like it but it just repeats itself to much. try changing it up a bit

Invicta_Veritas
06-20-2006, 10:35 PM
Sounds like a decent intro to a Melodic Death Metal or Blackened Death Metal song. If you wanted to make it a short intro trck, change it up a little bit and more often, and try to add more intensity to it towards the end.