need help w/ songwriting.

[punkemohardcorekid]

k. i got lyrics i like. i got music to go w/ it that i like. i can even make some gnarly melody lines to do the lyrics w/. what's lame is that i have no idea how to do vocal breaks in other places than just @ the end of sentences or thoughs. help me!!11!!!

[Merkaba]

...gnarly? .... Thats like....soooo 80's dude. Like, ya know?

[RazorJones]

If you can only do vocal breaks at the end of lines, then why not just cut the lines in half. Thus you have about half a sentence per line... Otherwise, I'm not sure how to help. You might try making a cooler name.

[ljump12]

There is a songwriting and lyrics forum; ask there...

[punkemohardcorekid]

alright.