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sjada
05-29-2006, 12:57 PM
I've been messing around with this for a while and i'm not sure if it was good enough to be worth it or not but this is all I got. If it sounds religious, it wasnt supposed to. Say anything you want about it.

You dont kow what its like.
You dont know how to change.
You cant deliver us from evil
Just deliver us from pain.

Deliver us from pain.
Even though you know
Inside your mind your gonna go insane
Deliver us from pain.

You dont know what to fight.
You never learned to see the light.
You cant find a place to hide
'Till you deliver us from pain.

Deliver us from pain.
Even though you know
Inside your mind your gonna go insane
Deliver us from pain.

You've never been to hell
Though it servesyou so well.
You cant deliver us from evil
Just deliver us from pain.

crimson hands
05-29-2006, 01:05 PM
you repeat the line "Deliver us from pain" far too much for it to have the kind of effect you probably want it to have.

sjada
05-29-2006, 01:08 PM
I guess I did kind of go overboard with that line. Thanks