Nothing's Gold

[WashburnPlayer]

started out as a "bellringer"( assignment at the begining of class(written on the board) that is supposed to get our brains "warmed up") but im thinking of turning it into a song...

its too hot
its too cold
nothings perfect
nothings gold

where did this go
where is it going
this has all fallen
why is it dieing

this has all gone to hell
its seems as though its staying there
is it too late to fix this?
should we even care?

its too hot
its too cold
nothings perfect
nothings gold

were too late to patch this up
we might as well give up

nothings perfect
nothings gold
anymore


crit for crit

[meizmatt]

so is it a song or the actual assignemnt? im not tryin to be an asshole, i just wanna know...

other than that, i like your use of "nothings perfect...nothings gold" as a motif in the song. It ties the song together well, esp. with the change at the end.

[WashburnPlayer]

it WAS an assignmen, but im going to turn it into a song.
and thank you

[sjada]

This definitly could work well as a song. I love the "nothings perfect, nothings gold" part but the second verse kind of bothers me.