opinions please (wasting away for you)

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rough draft opinions please

chris


Damnation sounds good
If I can meet you there
Won’t see you here
So forget the prayer
Take some time to waste a life
For just one chance
To put you right

Broken through corrupted soil
How far from the tree
I guess it takes time
To be so wrong
So sit and wait with me

Break your silence with a fist
Unwanted attention never given
Happy never to have known those eyes
But long fingers corrupt
From so far away

Don’t waste your breath
Can’t hear the truth
Just leaves me with the taste of doubt
If it’s alright with you
I’ll bide my time
And kick you when you’re down

Broken through corrupted soil
How far from the tree
I guess it takes time
To be so wrong
So sit and wait with me

[Gutter_Phenom]

:eek: open ur heart to jesus . but still wasnt that great. sounded to generic and said before. no metas or wordplay or anything. it was simple but still not horrible. didnt seem like it had a purpose or was tellin me somethin i dont know if that was what u were aiming for or not but my fav lines


"Break your silence with a fist
Unwanted attention never given
Happy never to have known those eyes
But long fingers corrupt"

keep writin my nikkuh