View Full Version : A Love So Bias.
EatingABook
04-29-2006, 09:33 AM
You came here unaware of the pain that was to real, how I lay here in this pit of misery that life has thrown me into. And here I will remain, where I will cry my last tears, my eyes will dry but it will all be the same. Can you here my heart flutter at the screams of my love for you, their helping me along death's road, hell itsself is to scared to travel alonside me. Tell me is it safer to follow you? I've lost touch with the voiceof all thats true. The only thing I can see is the hideous beatuy of what will never be. I try and regain all that i was to help you understand that your love means nothing to me.
slack
04-29-2006, 12:37 PM
I couldn't get into this. It's very, very melodramatic and overwritten. All the talk of death's road, hell and pits of misery made me want to cringe. Why? I suppose it's the loftiness, the sheer pretentiousness of it, and the fact that pit of misery and death's road are not images at all, in my opinon.
It wallows too much.
And you're only supposed to post one song a day.
incubotic
04-29-2006, 01:47 PM
EMO, sorry that was pretty lame really man. Way too much hyperbole there and also very cliched. I dont like laying into people online but that was quite terrible.
Also btw its HEAR not here.
SubtleDagger
04-29-2006, 06:04 PM
One song a day, don't mention emo unless you want me to point out your idiocy.
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