Couple of new jams- No Remembrance

[PrOddiNgMe]

hey whats up.. i've finished up a couple of new tracks ive been working on...
"vision"
"Killing Creation"
"Regain Consciousness"
please check them out and tell me what you think of them... PLEASE!!
-thanks :smoke:


http://nothingness.dmusic.com/

[the next big thing]

arrrrrrrggggggggg horrible, everythings horrible. U got some good ideas that could be turned into awsome songs but u **** it up with that horrible, over distorted guitar tone and crappy vocals. That goes for pretty much everything, not just them two tracks.

From what I can gather this is just you (please correct me if i'm wrong). Ok first you cant sing, or growl, or apparantly use u're vocals to any good effect.
Check out the threads about singin ect if u haven't already and if u're really serious get lessons or somethin cause at the minute it's not soundin good at all. Can u sream at all? cuz would sound pretty good to tis kind of music.

Next thing like i said above is that lead guitar tone. It sounds like ****, dont know what equipment u're usin but it must be able to sound better than that. Turn the distortion down and fiddle with the tone controls till it sounds better (probably less treble). The bass guitar is also a bit weak soundin, i know that plenty of band have bass like this but personally i don't like it. Also u go a bit overkill on the effects. Try to use them a bit more tastefully.

Like I said before u have plenty of good ideas and with a bitbit of work u could have some killer songs. The solos are really good, and from what i've heard so far fit in with the songs really well.

Anyway gettin on to the two songs u want critin,


Killing Creation: Nice acoustic gutair. I like the way it's sounding untill the vocals come in, bad singing and bad use of effects. The song itself i good and i can see what u're tryin to go for with the vocal but u can't pull it yourself. The lead guitar had that crappy tone, and tho it was a gud solo i would have left it out and kept the song just acoustic.

Regain Consciousness: Pretty gud but way too long usin the the same basic riff. Bad singin again and i don't like the bass tone. I'd rewite the song puttin some extra ideas in it. This song was not as stong as the other stuff u've done an got boring pretty quickly. I did quite like that second guitar tho, that was pretty cool.


If this all is just u at the min then u shud form a band and u cud get some awsome stuff done, claim the role as lead guitarist and get some decent players (includin a good singer) an u'd be well on the way. (again if i got it wrong and it is'nt just one person doin this tell me and i'll change the post acordingly)

Btw if u think this is harsh, it is meant to be constructive, i'd aprecciate if u did the same for my band in my thread,

http://www.sputnikmusic.com/forums/showthread.php?t=459887

[PrOddiNgMe]

ouch... ok thanks for the feedback. atleast you thought my lead was good :thumb: