The Notebook

[xAsix]

We spread across every page
enthralled, we search for this higher meaning.
the quintessence of human emotion put onto paper.
the lives we live desperately captured to salvage a moment.
mark the end of each and every era.
with widespread charm we'll lead and live our lives like kings and queens.
we'll be marked in the life's notebook as the men and women who saved the world

it's short. but it's meant to be that way.

[drifting away]

You say it's meant to be short and thats cool. I just thought that I'd tell you that has a lot of potental to become something great.
I do like it though and there is nothing to change as far as i see it in that little bit. I would give a 4/5 and the four is just because it is short.


Drifting...

[jsu]

i'd like to see some music to that. short, but meant to be that way, huh? well maybe i'm just partial to longer songs. but you're on a roll. i say 3/5.