silent killer

[MarshallArtist3203]

Verse:
We say weve had times we wouldnt trade for the world,
But where are they now? And what did you gain?
Youve handed them away, unknowing and alone
But Where is your world in return?

Chorus:
So will you be the silent killer, and infiltrate unnoticed?
Or will you draw attention to yourself,
by yelling when its hopeless?

Verse 2:
Sitting in this room guarded inside and out
where all is motionless who dares to make a sound
then a pencil falls to the floor and a paper tears with a hiss
all goes dark with no way to be sure of the chaos ensuing amidst

Chorus

Interlude:
When its dark whos gonna shine tonight for you,
and when its dark whos gonna shine tonight,
for all of us in here too
when its dark will there be light inside
a place for us to run and hide
a place for us to stop and rest our minds

Chorus

You say youve had some times we wouldnt trade for the world
But where are they now and what did you gain...


Iv fixed this from earlier tell me wut u think

[StandardStringReject]

i listened to Famous Monster by Saliva while i read that... it would sound really good with a slow sort of music like that.. i'll do a real crit on this later. it sounds good tho :)

[deathbyjello]

this would go go with music like Dark Side of the Moon or something slow.

[deathbyjello]

*good