check out: BRAND NEW ACOUSTIC TRACKs

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please check out a few recordings me and the other guitar player of my band wrote and recorded.

http://www.purevolume.com/cherub

any feedback would be greatly appreciated

ps. note the recording quality on the Forest Cry is sub-par

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[Megadeth84]

i thought it was very good, if you got a singer you'd probably get a crap load more plays. the majority of people don't wanna listen to instrumentals

[Miss Bungle]

The Mirror, The Door, The Fear: The two guitars combine nicely to create a nice sound. It could really do with some vocals, or at least some kind of melody line. It's a pretty song.

Eagle Eye: Sounds kinda similar to the first track. Again the guitars combine nicely, but I think it's too similar in style to the first track. Still pretty though.

The Forest Cry: Quality was kinda bad. I think you guys should try writing a happy song at somepoint. The solo line needs a bit more work to feel authentic. Pretty enough but similar in style to your other works.

The Opera: Pretty, but again similar in style. You need to try and deviate more, I think.

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thanks for the review

anyone else wanna check it out?

[Megadeth84]

The Mirror, The Door, The Fear: The two guitars combine nicely to create a nice sound. It could really do with some vocals, or at least some kind of melody line. It's a pretty song.

Eagle Eye: Sounds kinda similar to the first track. Again the guitars combine nicely, but I think it's too similar in style to the first track. Still pretty though.

The Forest Cry: Quality was kinda bad. I think you guys should try writing a happy song at somepoint. The solo line needs a bit more work to feel authentic. Pretty enough but similar in style to your other works.

The Opera: Pretty, but again similar in style. You need to try and deviate more, I think.

while your on the subject, any advice on how to write a happy song? im pretty new to songwriting, and all my songs come out sounding sad, haha. on guitar that is

[Miss Bungle]

while your on the subject, any advice on how to write a happy song? im pretty new to songwriting, and all my songs come out sounding sad, haha. on guitar that is
My best advice:

1) Wait until it's a sunny day
2) Stick in a major key
3) Listen to some happy music

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yea vocals will hopefully be what they all need

[evil_knives1337]

It's funny but your music makes me want to sing.

Get a vocalist it will make the tracks 100x better.. I should rephrase that...

Get a GOOD vocalist it will make the tracks 100x better!

If you get a bad vocalist.. they'll suck.

-Ted

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yea man that has been a hard thing to do so far hahah

[Neon Dub]

Songs are ace. I don't think they nessasarily need a singer.. haha that's probably because I listen to so much instrumental music anyway.

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thanks so much man, and thanks for taking the time to listen

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anyone else?

[DylanYoung]

Good music! But you'll have to get a singer! But that's my thing. For me music isn't complete without vocals. Cause in my perspective, I want to hear a message. And for an odd reason I can't hear it without lyrics :)

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thanks man, yea vocals are a priority to get right now.. and the need is much more obvious with out electric and heavier sounding material

[godspeed]

hell yeah...now this is some really good stuff. luv it a lot.builds up a perfect atmosphere, but like nearly everyone was saying..get yourself a singer...or alternate...a violin player...hm?...i guess the violin idea could be wicked...

anyways...keep up the good work..thumbs up

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thanks a lot! yup that seems to be the general consensus here..
violin could be interesting..

[CoZ]

Good stuff, man... good stuff.

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thanks bro

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anyone else wanna take a quick lsten?

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please haha

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anyway theres a new song up on the myspace if anyones interested

thanks everyone so far for your opinion