Challenge 105: Revolution - Replies

[sketchyjoe]

Revolve away.

[TojesDolan]

Viva la revolución!

[Jetpack]

Gringos revoluceion!!!!!!!

[Lowridenn]

You say you want a revolution
Well you know
We all want to change the world.

[Dinosawesome]

omg edit!

[jurialmunkey]

I'm really not sure about this one... is it any good, i can't decide...

[Disco Donkey]

I sense a lot of political songs in the batch this time around...

[jurialmunkey]

Is revolting an exceptable form of revolution?? Because I don't think revoluting is a real word...

[pixiesfanyo]

http://www.sputnikmusic.com/review_5721

Postman Syndrome - Terraforming review.

[sketchyjoe]

I sense a lot of political songs in the batch this time around...Politics, from the Latin poly meaning many and ticks meaning blood-sucking leeches.


My original choice for the challenge word was cunt but I thought better of it.

[jurialmunkey]

^^ that would have made for some interesting songs

[DFelon204409]

Woooo challenges!!! Revolve that mofo.

[Bigbadbob]

I'm really not sure about this one... is it any good, i can't decide...

As an impartial reader I'd say yes

But, as a competitor...... I curse you, master of dark imagery, sorcerer of phrase and text, necromancer of garnishing coveted 1st and 2nd's.

have a nice day

[jurialmunkey]

As an impartial reader I'd say yes

But, as a competitor...... I curse you, master of dark imagery, sorcerer of phrase and text, necromancer of garnishing coveted 1st and 2nd's.

have a nice day

Why thank you, and yes I will have nice day.

[DFelon204409]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nda_OSWeyn8&search=leprechaun

[sketchyjoe]

I think judging's going to be hard on this.

[CSD & the Soul Machines]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nda_OSWeyn8&search=leprechaun
Oh my God.

[conniption]

I tried something relatively new to me this time. Its in a more "standard" or "normal" structure with a chorus and such. Fun, fun..

[Tainted_Soul]

Oh my God.

wow...It makes me proud to be Mexican...than ugly memories of the chupacabras start flowing...

[Bigbadbob]

I tried something relatively new to me this time. Its in a more "standard" or "normal" structure with a chorus and such. Fun, fun..

I will lower your score accordingly:p

[DFelon204409]

Raise the roof for voting.

[pixiesfanyo]

hey i'm on black & white and in a church

/raises the roof.

[conniption]

I will lower your score accordingly:p

All I really did was add a chorus. Binary Star is so sick. Anyone listen to them?

[pixiesfanyo]

In jail
Without the bail
In jail
Without the bail
In jail

[conniption]

Hey sketchyjoe, my song was about how walmart takes over "Ma and Pa" businesses. Just tellin' ya in case it makes more sense if you read it again.

[jurialmunkey]

Hey sketchyjoe, my song was about how walmart takes over "Ma and Pa" businesses. Just tellin' ya in case it makes more sense if you read it again.

^^ Don't limit your writing's context/meaning by giving us such a black&white meaning to it... People are capable of finding their own meaning to poetry, that is supposed to be part of the beauty of writing.

[sketchyjoe]

Hey sketchyjoe, my song was about how walmart takes over "Ma and Pa" businesses. Just tellin' ya in case it makes more sense if you read it again.
I completely missed that. When you mentioned smileys I immediately thought of Banksy. (http://www.chezmanucbien.net/banksy/smiley.jpg)

[conniption]

^^ Don't limit your writing's context/meaning by giving us such a black&white meaning to it... People are capable of finding their own meaning to poetry, that is supposed to be part of the beauty of writing.

I hear what you're saying man. I was just trying to set him on track, if you know what I mean.

[Littlejohn]

I hate drummers. Ours is skipping our recording date because he has a Halo 2 tournament. Dammit.

[Bigbadbob]

Come on you slugs..... get the votes on

[RunAmokRampant]

I hate drummers

That generalisation couldn't be any more true. Damn freeloaders too lol.

[jurialmunkey]

My votes are up... I promise I'll try and put some comments up tommorrow if I get time... Can't think anymore tonight.

[ATC]

I'll get my votes up tonight. Sorry for the delay. I blame British economic history for my plight.

[DFelon204409]

I'm DQing myself because I'm gettin busy.

[jurialmunkey]

^^ No.. ur lazy... ;)

[Disco Donkey]

Holy mother of god, this seems like the longest challenge in the history of history!

[Bigbadbob]

the following are banned (next challenge) for not voting
returnofthebiz
lowridenn
tainted soul
dfelon

and the winner is, with a nice entry I might add:
drumroll please............................................ ...........................

jurial 2.2 (lowest score was 4th)
littlejohn 3.5 (no two votes the same except two 4th)
dfelon 3.6 (the most 1st place votes - 3)
ATC 3.7 (three 7th place votes did ya in)

the rest of ya just dont want it bad enough
bbb 4.7
sketchyj 4.8
pixiesfanyoi 5.2
returnofthe biz 6.0
lowridenn 6.0
nath 8.2
tainted soul 8.6
conniption 9.8
cardcheat 10.7

[pixiesfanyo]

aw, jurial is the cutest.

[jurialmunkey]

*blushes*

[jurialmunkey]

Next Challenge is up........... Sticky tape please.

[Tainted_Soul]

ouch...sorry for not getting the crits up in time. Oh well, thats how it goes. Thnx for the crits, I'm slowly moving up (hahaha anywhere but dead last is up for me...) "the man who has no ambition never fails...he who never fails always succeeds...he who always succeeds is all-powerful."