what do you guys think of this? (recording)

[bassmancrv]

hey, ive started to use my m-audio pre usb, recording interface lately and i got a few good things to come out of it

ive got 2 peices of this song im putting together and i was wondering what you guys thought of it..

www.soundclick.com/ariannassiri

dt song...................a bit of double thumping
dt song pt 2.............a bit of tapping

( the other 2 things were recorded like 2 years ago, so there awful dont even bother to listen to them )

any feedback i can get on these would be great
- thanks alot

[jon_slaps_bass]

another example of chops with no soul. its happening all too often these days.

[deemo]

another example of chops with no soul. its happening all too often these days.

well, define soul?

on the other hand, not bad for what you're doing but the 2 tracks don't suit eachother. plus the melody line on the one is really over powering and the slapping is all in the back and not as defined. makes it a tad boring and repetitive