Slow pop song

[GenevaRanger]

Hi All,

Here you find a pop song of me that I wrote some time ago. Any comments are welcome!

http://www.musicatelier.com/index.php?page=site/playAudio.php%3Fsongid=47

Best,
Arjan

[FA]

I like your voice. The song was ok actually, I could probably listen to more.