Broken- Seether Cover. Crit for Crit

[PeacefulRocker]

Hey, I'm new to post my music here.. thought i'd go ahead and do it.

I just created a myspace music account today and put a few of my songs on it, this song is a cover of Broken by Seether. Everything done by me, please tell me what you think of it. Give the entire thing a listen, it gets better towards the end

If you have work you'd like me to critique, post a link here and I will.

Thanks,
Marcus

http://myspace.com/marcushearnmusic

or
http://libito.dmusic.com

[Herbert]

Ok here goes. To start... you were a little bit too fast. The guitar work sounded really decent- nice one :). You need to work on your singing though. It's a bit too nasaly... also try holding some of the notes for longer so it doesn;t come to such an abrupt stop after each line. I would turn the vocals down a bit and the guitar up aswell so you get more of a balance.
On a different note, did you use a tab to learn the song or by ear? I'm just struggling to find a decent one.

[PeacefulRocker]

Well I sped the song up because I thought the original version sounded too slow.. I wasen't going for the exact same sound as the original. And I learned the song by ear, sorry :(

[Surgicalgod]

Quality of recording: Bad, you probably recorded on a crappy pc mic.

Music: I thought the music was fine, you did the song justice.

Vocals: They weren't that good. Off tune lots of times, and a bit mellow. The backup vocals parts made them a bit better, but still you still got a long way ahead of you vocally. Take lessons if you're not already doing that.

Good luck!