Part of my bands first song

[Panvium]

Well this is the beggining of our first song (that either of us ever made actually heh). And yes, i realize: bad quality, we mess up and its only me (guitar) and my drummer. We just got our bass parts down this weekend and just curious at how were doing so far.

http://s39.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2N853HITYMLED3E912GXGXB01B

Any comments/suggestions for improvement?