Kicked from Sleep. Crit for crit.

[Ruining]

I know this one comes out of nowhere with the screaming, and they may be mixed a little loud in the first chorus, but I'd be interested in what everyone thinks of this style. It's a style that I'm most interested in, and want to persue more for my next project. Let me know

Thanks for the listen, and crit for crit, as usual.

Kicked from Sleep. (http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=502276)

[Doze]

im sorry but i cant get that link to work somehow...i get surprisingly an error message..

[Ruining]

hmm... works for me. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=502276

maybe copy and paste.

[Doze]

i like the screaming part...but i dont like the vocals in the rest of the song...maybe too weird melody for my taste. but the idea in this song is pretty cool. and because it seems that long intros are forbidden in this world i must mentione that this one has maybe a bit too long intro.