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xAsix
03-11-2006, 04:07 PM
Believing is abstraction and I for one, choose to live that way.
In a world full of believers and hypocrites the masquarade finally seems so clear to me.
Give me hope of a brighter tomorrow, give me a choice to repent and relenquish my sorrows.
Make this all clear to me as recently your answers have left me sceptic, your compromises, mere rhetoric.
It all makes sense now.
My peace of mind, lost.
And you come flying towards me like vultures on angst ridden corpses, with promises so clear, yet so expensive.
I'll save myself and keep this dream of a sane world.
I might still be searching for faith, but there has to be brighter days and better tomorrows.

any comments?

purgatory
03-14-2006, 02:45 PM
not as a song. but for a journal entry this wold have been pretty juicy to read lol

Hellion462606
03-15-2006, 03:06 PM
I like it. I also like the writing style. Few people free flowing and chorusless or without the chorus being pronounced.

burton.and.gas
03-15-2006, 03:19 PM
not bad dude, its nice to see somone else who writes free flowing stuff.