slip_knot576
03-11-2006, 01:48 PM
Ok, I took your critism, and I turned around and edited it. I kinda like this one better, I'll put the link to the old one at the end. Tell me what you think.
Thinking of you is a memory
Reliving again My misery
Lying awake but you can't see
What the hell You've done to me
*small gutiar solo kinda*
Another second another lie
I hate place I think I'd rather die
In my head rewinding time
Give it all...another try
I was thinking this new chrus. It's in the slanty words
Haven(haven)
Saven(saven)
I'll never know this feeling
Cause all these problems that I'm dealing with keep coming up and it's just a thought but I hate youuuu I hate youuuuuu I hate you hate you I think I hate you
There is no haven
I'll never be saved and
I'll out this hell, but can't you tell, I hate you
In the dark looking at the ceiling
Words can't describe howI am feeling
What did I do?
Never good for you or (what did I do wrong)
(Why are nights so long)
Where is the day and why am I afraid
Thinking of you is a memory
Reliving again My misery
Lying awake but you can't see
What the hell You've done to me
*small gutiar solo kinda*
Another second another lie
I hate place I think I'd rather die
In my head rewinding time
Give it all...another try
I was thinking this new chrus. It's in the slanty words
Haven(haven)
Saven(saven)
I'll never know this feeling
Cause all these problems that I'm dealing with keep coming up and it's just a thought but I hate youuuu I hate youuuuuu I hate you hate you I think I hate you
There is no haven
I'll never be saved and
I'll out this hell, but can't you tell, I hate you
In the dark looking at the ceiling
Words can't describe howI am feeling
What did I do?
Never good for you or (what did I do wrong)
(Why are nights so long)
Where is the day and why am I afraid