Original song, Demo for my Demo so to speak.

[Blakfeld]

Well, Im playing around with a song before I do a final version to go on my demo, and I thought maybe you guys could give me some pointers on cleaning it up. I know the mixing in it needs a ton of improvement, so if anyone has any tips for fixing that, and any general critques on anything, my vocals, guitar, my shoddy skills as a pianist, anything.


its the song called Comfortable Rut

http://www.myspace.com/korybrown