'Little Sorry'

[dead_romantic]

the influence for this was the cure.
vocally anyway.



"Little Sorry"

tearfully staged;
so stunning in red.
how you slay the conversation
as it goes over your head

you make it seem ridiculous when;
we tear it all out.
broken conversations you
know nothing about

and even if you try;
(like i think that you do?).
there's nothing you could say
that would make it untrue

but now that it's over..
can i buy us a drink?
because i'm feeling a little sorry
and you need time to think

yeah..

[the_best_of_me]

I like this... are you going to use this as a song, or leave it as like poetic-verse kinda thing?

[dead_romantic]

it's a song i was working on.
it's sort of a poem being sang over with music (music almost like background noise, ie sounds of pubs/bars with experimental music).

i don't think i'll be adding a chorus though, nothing seems to fit without making it tacky sounding.

cheers for the feedback mate

[jb6oclock]

excellent writing, I think with a chorus and some good rock music this would kick ***. 8.4/10