on your name - Balthazaar

[noodle69]

please give constructive critism for this track i wrote for a friends vox!!!

vox are not on yet !!!

hard rock racing game type music !!!

http://www.mixposure.com/song.php?songid=24652

thanks for listening

[noodle69]

anyone ?

[GeorgeHarrison]

did you do that with some dum machine?

The added noises dont really go with the song.

Other than that its a nice little Funk/blues/hard rock thing going on.

[Ruining]

Ummm... I think the added noises could be worked in to do some good. Not really working out like they are sitting right now. Pretty damn good guitar work. I'm not a big fan of this processing in the guitars, but you got some chops. I think if you tightened things up a bit and brought the lead stuff in the mix a little, it would rock. It reminds me of something Bill and Ted would listen to. Old Vai, or something.

[noodle69]

i'll do that next time , thanks guys!!!