My Star - A song about a girl I recently met

[carpediem12]

This is a personal song, im still playing around with it but for now, this is the finished version. I can write a paragraph about it but I think its just best if you listen to it. I like it, let me know if you do as well.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=448952&songID=3596821

[GeorgeHarrison]

I like it. Very calm and quiet. Reminds me of a quite acoustic Pink Floyd song.

Very well done, nice, simple lyrics.

Its 10x better than any of the metal **** ppl post on here.

[carpediem12]

I like it. Very calm and quiet. Reminds me of a quite acoustic Pink Floyd song.

Very well done, nice, simple lyrics.

Its 10x better than any of the metal **** ppl post on here.

Thanks for listining man, i know what you mean about the metal song but again I use to listen to metal as well and people have different tastes

[carpediem12]

anyonelse?

[littlebob]

that was sweet if only i could sing i could make good songs too :(
nice cruisy song but not jack johnson cruisy kinda i dunno it was cool

[Ruining]

I like it. Very calm and quiet. Reminds me of a quite acoustic Pink Floyd song.

Very well done, nice, simple lyrics.

Its 10x better than any of the metal **** ppl post on here.

Damn, I'm sick of hearing this from you. Are you assuming that just because it's metal, it isn't musical? There is a sh!tton of metal that is really musical and interesting to listen to if you give it a chance. There are bad songs posted on this site, but not all metal is bad. Just because you want to have George Harrison's gaybies, doesn't mean you can only like his music.:rolleyes:

[Ruining]

Not a fan of the vocal style, but there were some cool riffs in the guitar, and the recording is up to par. Overall, I think it was pretty good, but not my style. The lyrics were a little cliche, but it seems like you accomplished your ultimate goal.

Thanks for the listen.