[a subtle change of heart]

[BassMan182]

think it's done..
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even a subtle change of heart
is enough to leave a scar
i am one of those fragile ones

and I'm out to change the world
but the world is changing me
there must be somewhere i belong

and as the feeling grows it shows
that we all make our mistakes
studying the show
with a thumping heart-ache

ohhh
do you think that i can make it on my own
ohhh
living hand to mouth and sleeping alone
ohhh
do you think that i can make it on my own

i'm underneath these blossom trees
the clouds sit high above
i wonder if she knows i know
and always knew i would

her heart is taking off
to a place it's never seen
maybe if she called my love
we could act out that scene

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thanks

[DeadReligion]

I like the first two lines. The rest, however, is bland...nothing interesting or eye-catching about it.

[hale]

i actually like the title, and song...i think its pretty good..

[BassMan182]

thanks... i've kinda gone off it though, haha