i8amooseonce
02-08-2006, 12:40 AM
This is a piece i've written. The riff and timing has already been written as well. I guess i'd just like to know what people think of the message that the words themselves convey. Any comments are apriciated. (ps. i'm brand new to this board. it seems very helpful so i intend to use it)
your scarf still sits in my room
hanging by the hopes that you’ll return
the cloth still reminds me of you
I don’t want it to.
Its sad for me to know you like a sunset in memory’s blue winter
keeping warm by the words tossed between our lips.
Our kiss held passion. But somehow, dear, I think we missed.
your words scribbled on a page
they satisfy a longing I’d always had inside.
That day that rain washed out all our plans
We layed around
Learned to laugh at things we lost. I had you
Its sad for me to know you like a sunset in memory’s blue winter
The cold air wrapped by words tossed between our lips.
We kissed passion. But somehow, dear, I think we missed.
your scarf still sits in my room
hanging by the hopes that you’ll return
the cloth still reminds me of you
I don’t want it to.
Its sad for me to know you like a sunset in memory’s blue winter
keeping warm by the words tossed between our lips.
Our kiss held passion. But somehow, dear, I think we missed.
your words scribbled on a page
they satisfy a longing I’d always had inside.
That day that rain washed out all our plans
We layed around
Learned to laugh at things we lost. I had you
Its sad for me to know you like a sunset in memory’s blue winter
The cold air wrapped by words tossed between our lips.
We kissed passion. But somehow, dear, I think we missed.