Challenge 102 - Voting

[pixiesfanyo]

pixiesfanyo
sketchyjoe
bigbadbobbieo
atcharo
conniptionao
RunAmokRampanto
Silenceevolvos
Dfelon

lez go bitchos

[conniption]

pixiesfanyo 3
sketchyjoe 6
bigbadbobbieo 5
atcharo 2
conniptionao X
RunAmokRampanto 4
Silenceevolvos 7
Dfelono 1

Espanol es mi idioma favorita.

[ATC]

pixiesfanyatos -6 - Nice. Didn't grab me though.
sketchyjoaotos -3 - I could stand the rhyming(mostly) but the flow and writing hold it together.
bigbadbobbiatos -7 - Not bad. Just that it's less strong.
atcharatos -x
conniptionatos -5 - Didn't like the title. I like the content and how you've told it despite its lack of whoa factor.
RunAmokRampantios -4 - I critted this. *hint*
Silenceevolvos - 2 - Interesting structure. Well-written, except for the overkill at the end.
Dfelonios - 1 - Very well-written narrative.

Go Greek, bitches

[RunAmokRampant]

pixiesfanyo - short and pretty sweet. 3

sketchyjoe - the rhyming is aggravating and stale. 7

bigbadbobbieo - Have you written something similar to this? I have a feeling you wrote something similar. Anyway I liked it pretty much. 4

atcharo - this is almost a mixture of prose and poetry. When I read it I cannot help but read it fast because you've created quite a tone with this piece. Pretty good. 2

conniptionao - No doubt written well, just seems that there is still something lacking. 5

Silenceevolvos - Interesting to say the least. Not bad but not winning material unfortunately 6

Dfelon - Loved the story, you told it well. 1

[sketchyjoe]

pixiesfanyo - 7th
sketchyjoe
bigbadbobbieo - 6th
atcharo - 1st
conniptionao - 4th
RunAmokRampanto - 5th
Silenceevolvos - 3rd
Dfelon - 2nd

[DFelon204409]

pixiesfanyo - 6.8 - Your language is good. No doubt about that. But I feel everything is too opaque. Your two primary established imagery sets are about allure and devotion and nature and greenness. Those two sets work well together as they're original but I'm having trouble getting a greater sense of what you're going for. Too hard to drag meaning out of. The use of the word "dilate" is awkward but the intent is awesome.

sketchyjoe - 7.0
bigbadbobbieo - 6.5
atcharo - 7.8
conniptionao - 5.9
RunAmokRampanto - 5.8
Silenceevolvos - 5.6
Dfelon- no

Rankings
1. atc
2. sketchyjoe
3. pixies
4, bbb
5. conniption
6. runamok
7. silenceevolves

[Bigbadbob]

6th... pixiesfanyo

3rd... sketchyjoe: Is this a BECK single?

bigbadbobbieo

5th...atcharo: That is one........ long..........sentance!

7th... conniptionao: Doesnt strike a chord right off... but I'll keep trying.

2nd.... RunAmokRampanto: for some reason I dont like the Bees metaphor, the rest is, how you say....supurb.

4th... Silenceevolvos: different.... I like that.

1st... Dfelon: Ya just cant miss with pastels

[silenceevolves]

oh, right i was in this.

pixiesfanyo - 3
sketchyjoe - 7
bigbadbobbieo - 5
atcharo - 1
conniptionao - 4
RunAmokRampanto - 6
Silenceevolvos
Dfelon - 2

[pixiesfanyo]

sketchyjoe - 5
bigbadbobbieo - 4
atcharo - 7
conniptionao - 6
RunAmokRampanto - 3
Silenceevolvos - 2
Dfelon - 1