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Manimal
01-29-2006, 09:33 PM
http://s52.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1T8TTC0U4NFHX28A8NNN3XL8P5

and


http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0BSN1V8BA971A1POLPYY7DIX29

Let me know what you think.

carpediem12
01-30-2006, 01:52 AM
What I use To be, sorry not really my type. I think it was long and a bit boring.
Sing to me, on the other hand, is just great. You have a lot of singing issues, but the song itself is actually very enjoyable. Great dynamics.(when it goes to So sing to me... till the end is very cool).
The begining sets up this change very nicely. Thumbs up to lyrics on this one, i really dig it.

Silverhammer
01-30-2006, 08:51 PM
i really enjoyed "what i used to be" the strumming pattern is clean but what i can recommend is to try to get that buzz out of your voice when you sustain a note especially when you sing "i want to get back" there is where it is most prominent, but i really liked the strumming pattern and you sang it nice, tempo wise. also try to make the backup contrast the lead a little more b/c it is just getting in the way of the lead vocals in certain parts like the beginning, but it gets somewhat better here and there.

"Sing it to me" sounded to me at least that it was way off key, but i loved the chorus, that was as carpediem said dynamic and a nice change. i suggest doing some singing exercises so that buzz can get smoothed out of your singing. but overall they are nice pieces that you have. great job man!