Acoustic "Hallelujah" first verse

[flywithdiamonds]

So I've just started learning how to record and this is my first attempt. Let me know what you think and any helpful advice you may have :)

Hallelujah (http://s65.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=14F0ZR12XF4JX0P6ELLR4DRBK4)

[carpediem12]

Its pretty good man, you can do it better than me, I just started learning this song too.
One part (please the lord) was off a bit but rest were good.
Also I wouldnt add vocal harmonies to this, it just has to be a guitar and voice, one line. its just me though.

[Herbert]

It's sounding good, I look forward to hearing it completed :) I love this song, have you got a decent tab for it?

[flywithdiamonds]

I've been working it out by ear and messing around with my own picking pattern, but mainly using Jeff Buckleys. Thanks for the comments both of you.