new full on awesome song (rock)

[Vood]

here you go, full quality mp3 :)

David J Murphy - Among Stones (http://www.davidjmurphy.net/downloads/DavidJMurphy-AmongStones.mp3)

i'm playing all the instruments as usual, drums, bass, geetars, and vocals

it's a preview track for my upcoming CD so it'll likely evolve a bit

spread copies and enjoy! :thumb:

-david

[Vood]

Forgot to mention. Crits and comments are very welcome heheh.

[Mr.Chaotix]

Gud job as far as production goes...but there is a miss-match when it comes to the genre and the vocal modulation. A little more aggression in the vox ... a lil power.

Gud job!

[Phototropic]

It's alright, nothing special, neat production

[Shaoran]

Nice....but not so catchy...im not saying its an awesome job and a very sweet kind of thing for the song, but sometimes its a bit too slow. Give it some more energy or power..that would make it perfect :p :naughty:

[HighlighterSky]

Hey man I like it, I think if you were going for a Tool thing, even though it's an awesome line the bass might be a little too pronounced (it gives me kind of an elevator music feel). Like you've seen from the other members, not that its bad at all, but maybe some scattered heavy/ier agressive parts. If you're just jammin from... ya know... within... then disregard EVERYTHING YOU JUST READ and KUDOS :thumb:

[Vood]

wow, thanks for listening guys! :)

i think i see where you're each coming from ...

Mr Chaotix ... do you mean more aggression during the verses? i kind of like the laid back intimacy of that sound when i sing like that. or is that just awkward?

Phototropic.. can you think of anything that would make it more special? or is it just like overall not worth the bother to you?

Shaoran i'm not sure how i would add "more power" to the song though. do you mean like, heavier distortion breaks? cuz the drums and bass are already pretty punchy imo ... not sure what would add more power besides bigger guitars in places.. and i'd really prefer not to increase the tempo but i'll play with that and see...

Highlighter... i agree ... like i said above it'll likely evolve a bit .. i'm gonna give it a really soft ghosty part that builds into a huge meltdown hehe :) also i think a chorus or two could stand some serious beef .. along with the solo area.

as for the production.. i'm glad you guys think it sounds pretty good ... and yeah the bass was sort of an experiment but i actually like the sound a lot for this song ... maybe it's a little too hot.. i'll play with that ...

thanks again for listening and giving crits you guys :thumb:

-david