Even Angels Love To Ride

[nitetrapper]

Even angels love to ride
v1
I found my leather jacket
That I put away for good
As I held it in my hand
Something told me that I should
V2
I wonderd when this day would come
As I dusted off that bike
I could feel her presence near
First time in years this felt so right
Chorus
I could here her voice say
I loved it when we'd ride all day
The feeling of the wind,holding you so tight
The sound and the rumble from those twin pipes
I'd be talking to her,Not even try to hide
As she whispered in my ear Angel's love to ride
v3
My mind quickly goes back when that
Truck slammed into our side
She was gone from me so fast
Yet somehow I survived
v4
So I headed for the coastline
I felt her arms around my side
For now we were together
"cuz" even angels love to ride
Chorus
I could here her voice say
I loved it when we'd ride all day
The feeling of the wind,holding you so tight
The sound and the rumble from those twin pipes
I'd be talking to her,Not even try to hide
As she whispered in my ear Angel's love to ride

[Society Sellout]

Wow I haven't been here in a long time but I ran into this and I like it a lot.

I like how you danced around subjects with your words and never really were too blunt. The imagry in this is very powerful.

One party I thought was a little akward and might need a touch up is:

"I'd be talking to her,Not even try to hide"

This doesn't really fit, rythmicly, with the rest of the song. Also it should be "tryING".

[nitetrapper]

Hi society, thanks for the crituqe, what i was trying to say in the without even trying to hide line was .the fact that I was talking aloud to smoeone that no one else could see. I'll try to work something else in there because it does leave a person wondering. Take care and thanks again. Nite...........

[_AnarchistArmy_]

As soon i finished reading your lyrics, i can imagine the acoustic guitar during the verses and a smooth electric guitar during the chorus. This is one of the good song i saw since weeks. Good job! But there's always room for improvement.