To Reduce Serious Injury

[sandsoftime]

I was looking at my keyboard and it said the title of this song so i began to write based of of it. i think it was warning me of carpeltunnel

To Reduce Serious Injury

The crippling effects
Are etched into my soul
But the caveat is clear
Just read it from afar

To reduce serious injury
Just turn away from me
The warning labels written in bold
I am not what you think you see

Elegant letters tell
Of a destructive force
Buried in this fragile frame
It only needs a catalyst…you

To reduce serious injury
Just turn away from me
The warning labels written in bold
I am not what you think you see

Feelings of despair
This cautioning note
Isolates me from the crowd
Locked in a wordily bondage

To reduce serious injury
Just turn away from me
The warning labels written in bold
I am not what you think you see

[DeadReligion]

Elegant letters tell
Of a destructive force
Buried in this fragile frame
It only needs a catalyst…you
^ Take out, the ...you. Then this will be a solid 9/10. Until then it stays 8.8/10.

[sandsoftime]

thanks man will do

[dyuaru]

Hm I dont really like the warning labels thing but it might amuse others. Kinda interesting to me how you came up with the idea for a song. To me, this song didnt have too much of a message other than to stay away from you which to me isnt exactly a message :/ Work on some different ideas for lines about staying away from you or come up with a new theme altogether

[Snak3]

overall i like it, wow all that came from reading the cautrion label
haha

Elegant letters tell
Of a destructive force
Buried in this fragile frame
It only needs a catalyst…you

the "you" just dont sound right, well i dont think its necessary