rember your goodbyes (PLZ CRIT)

[screamo_is-mylife]

OK i know this song probly should get throwen away but im tryin to make it work so plz help any thing helps



verse 1
can feel your heart beat racing
can taste the fear in her sweat,
you've done this wrong
its to far gone these sheets tell of
regret, i admit that im just a fool
for you, im just a fool for
SCREAM
fear is where we both went wrong..
verse 2
tonight is your last chance to do
exactly what you want to, and this can
be my night, this is what makes me feel
alive, makes you feel alive
SCREAM
Fear is where we both went wrong
my heart isits way past beating.
verse 3
your lungs are failing and we both stop
breathing my heart is dead its way past beating
i never thought we would make it out alive( fallow your good byes <<SCREAM)
its all in your good bye........

well look who's dying now
slit wrist and sleepin with the girl next door
i always knew you were such a sucker for
that... it dosent matter what you say..
it never matterd anyway, it never matterd
anyway
SCREAM
read this slowy it never matter anyway so take a
breath and close your eyes...eyes...
your lungs are failing.. my heart is dead its
way past beating....
outro
i never thought
we'd make it out alive.. i never thought we'd make
it out alive...its all in your good byes,its all in
your good byes

[screamo_is-mylife]

come on dosent any 1 have any thing

[dyuaru]

Dude, you really shouldnt be doing this....
You took these lyrics from the band called Underoath..the song is A Boy Brushed Red....Come up with your own lyrics next time...0/10

http://www.sing365.com/music/lyric.nsf/A-Boy-Brushed-Red-Living-in-Black-and-White-lyrics-Underoath/011386EC839CCBF448256EB60011F9A8

[screamo_is-mylife]

yeah i know its underoath dumb *** we were redoing it and playing it at a battle of the bands

[Floydfanatic]

yeah i know its underoath dumb *** we were redoing it and playing it at a battle of the bands
you're an idiot

[screamo_is-mylife]

how am i an idoit for redoing a song that is done by Spencer Chamberlain,Aaron Gillespie Timothy McTague,James Smith,Grant Brandell, and Christopher Dudley??? dude ur a f*GG*T and have ur herd Our last night? well thats my band maybe u should go check us out and then see who's an idot! dick

[Floydfanatic]

first of all

"OK i know this song probly should get throwen away but im tryin to make it work so plz help any thing helps"

so you are going to make their song work, but you know it should get thrown away, even though it's already a recorded and published song?

nice...

secondly underoath can blow me, go listen to some real emo/screamo

third (from the rules thread):

[+] all work that you post is understood to be yours. do not post other people's work, or just a band's lyrics that you find nice. this is a forum for original submissions.

YOU ARE OFFICIALLY AN IDIOT

[screamo_is-mylife]

lol alright my bad for not saying its underoath second of all who the f*** do u think u r ur probly sum poser *** b**** that dosent have Sh*t to say except to others and ill repost a song that is truethfuly mine! dose that make u happy

[Floydfanatic]

who the f*** do u think u r ur probly sum poser *** b**** that dosent have Sh*t to say except to others

poser of what?

yeah i wasn't nice, you gonna cry?

and ill repost a song that is truethfuly mine! dose that make u happy

yes, although i have low expectations

[screamo_is-mylife]

alright.... dude its cool im not going to keep sayin sh*t cuz theres really no point but feel free to go and say crap about my actual song that i posted

[TwiztidLotus17]

all im gonna say is wow.

[jb6oclock]

Dear mods, please kill this moron...

[NeVer Fade 25]

i just dont get it....just cus ur redoing it...why r u looking for reviews on THEIR lyrics.????...if ur covering it thats fine ...but r u like unsure if the lyrics r good or not...?

[Avrilkiller]

He sounds unsure because he's a jackass who tried posting a kindof obscure band's lyrics, and when he got caught tried to save face. Totally ****ing low.

****ing loser. Come up with some of your own stuff that doesn't completely blow, then come back to the forums.

[emotionalfeedback]

i like underoath.
i like that song.
you stole it.
and that was wrong.

and im a dumb sh1t face for making such a bad poem in my 3 seconds but, write some of your own work .

[screamo_is-mylife]

you guys r seriously F***ING MORONS CAN U NOT SEE THE OTHER 3 SONGS THAT IVE POSTED