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theseeyesarecameras
01-20-2006, 08:28 AM
im scribbling post religious melodys
with an apron wearing god
as im swilling down my melodys
to see the lighthouse in the fog

the answer to "mr developments" are an 0161 away
"dear mr misery, id make you a cole drink sir, but i dont want you to stay"

Take yourself to the statue on angels hill and jot down a perscription like ernest hemingway"

"but doctor", "help cant help the helper"
"what if the doses are wrong"
"what if the chapters are too long"

"mr misery you sound like a door i once had"
"in the old ancoats lab?"

"just run to angels hill and jot your own perscription, and if the shaks dont stop
you can call me wrong"

"And if not"?

"then the lighthouse and the remedys lie in your songs"

"the verses in your bed
the chorus's in the phone line
when you photocopy clocks
just to save time"

"your the dreamer sir, im the believer".