Nothing to say?

[poo-poo-pee-pee]

I don't really have a tittle as of yet, but i'll probly just call it 'Nothing to say', as it's the first line of the chorus, lol. Any feedback is greatly appreachiated.

Verse

This was what you wanted,
I just went along with it,
I never cared,
And I know you never cared about me.
Now I regret,
Everything I've done, for you.
You take it all for granted.

Pre-Chorus

Without me you'd have died, one hundred times before.
And for every death there'd be another scar, marked across your wrist.
So don't come crawlin' back to me, when you realise that you're wrong.
I never said I wanted this.

Chorus

Nothing to say,
Apologies arn't worthy.
Another day,
I'll be back for you.
Nothing to lose,
So do it now or never.
Realise the truth,
That I never really gave a **** about you.

Verse 2
Think back two months ago,
to where this all began,
when you we're 'so depressed',
and I was the only one for you.
Now I regret,
Everything I've done, for you.
You take it all for granted.

Pre-Chorus

Chorus

Interlude

Missplace, the blame.
Erase, your name.
Realise your mistakes,
and try to set things right.

I never loved you.
I never loved you.
I never loved you.
That's a lie. (x2)

(^^^ Sung together ^^^ )

Chorus

Nothing to say,
Apologies arn't worthy.
Another day,
I'll be back for you.
Nothing to lose,
So do it now or never.
Realise the truth,
That you never really gave a **** about me...



Based on a true story, lol.

[poo-poo-pee-pee]

Wrong forum, my bad... :p
Ignore this thread...

[Mailman]

I'd suggest you chnage the name man.

"Nothing to say" - Brilliant early soundgarden song.

[Seafroggys]

Soundgarden?

pffft.....how about a good Jethro Tull song that came out in 1970 ;)

[Jovianknight]

ANGST.

I know you didn't mean to post that here, but... for the love of all that is holy, get something new to write about. No one worth a damn cares about retarded high school relationship breakup songs. They piss me off greatly.

What are you interested in or passionate about? If, for example, you're a real belt enthusiast, write a song about a belt. I would much rather listen to a bad song about a boy and his belt than another trivial whiny song about the exact same thing that 98% of all other songs are about.

I know you probably won't heed my advice, and perhaps you will somehow even get famous with this radical song---since it seems to have all the popular 'omg we were together now i hate you' cliche's---but know this my friend: I will never ever respect you as a musician. And that's what matters! What some guy from an internet forum thinks about you.