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kurtnovogrohl
01-19-2006, 02:02 AM
it's gonna be a fifty-fifty treatment
you'd be in and never outdoor
you'd be king long lost forgotten

it's gonna take a while i once remembered
there were lies i used to tell her
hidden secrets make it rotten

on and on the days go on
and on and on for what i made wrong
fall this time the times are useless
have you been through wonderful minds ?

shout out loud the ants are coming
there's a thought that ever was
once again and not forever

on and on the days go on
and on and on for what i made wrong
fall this time the times are useless
have you been through wonderful minds ?!!!!!!!!!

all the things you do you would do know
all the things you said you would say now
all the dreams come true in the meanlum
have you been through wonderful minds ?

have you been through wonderful minds ?!!!!!!!!!

all the things you said you would say now
all the things you do you would do know
all the dreams come true in the meanlum
have you been through wonderful

all the things you do you would do know
all the things you said you would say now
all the dreams come true in the meantime
have you been through wonderful

all the things you said you would say now
all the things you like you would like
all the dreams come true in the meantime
have you been through wonderful minds ?

it's gonna be a fifty-fifty treatment
you'd be in and never outdoor
you'd be king long lost forgotten

on and on the days go on
and on and on for what i made wrong
fall this time the times are useless
have you been through wonderful minds ?...

DeadReligion
01-19-2006, 04:33 PM
Much, much too repetitive, you should cut some of this out.

dyuaru
01-19-2006, 05:18 PM
Repertition is good but too much just doesnt work too well. Many of the lines are ruined when you use something too many times in the wrong places. Such as in the line "fall this time the times are useless" which has time twice. Work on that and your lyrics will improve.

Comment mine if you have the time.
http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=435488

kurtnovogrohl
01-20-2006, 12:53 AM
thanks for your crit..