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slickathenyou
01-18-2006, 05:53 PM
Hi everybody, I'm back with some new things. I've got more where this came from, but I just wrote this one really quick and I like how it sounds. I'll crit if you leave a link.

She said that I need to use more adjectives
I said not to tell me how to live
I'll describe things as I pick and choose
And right now I'm describing my middle finger to you

She said that that will never happen
I said I didn't mean it in the literal sense
Now that it's mentioned, I wouldn't mind
She said that I said the wrong stuff at the wrong time

That's all I've got for now, just gonna be quickie song. Tell me what you think!

DeadReligion
01-18-2006, 06:08 PM
She said that I need to use more adjectives
I said not to tell me how to live
I'll describe things as I pick and choose
And right now I'm describing my middle finger to you
^ This made me laugh pretty hard. Congratulations, I like it.

She said that that will never happen
I said I didn't mean it in the literal sense
Now that it's mentioned, I wouldn't mind
She said that I said the wrong stuff at the wrong time^ Only bad line here is the last. I love this, its quite humorous. I don't know how Subtle will take it though.

http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=435194

HazMan
01-18-2006, 06:11 PM
not bad at all man, quite funny that middle finger lyric