rays a skanker
01-18-2006, 05:33 PM
I did this a little while ago it doesnt have a name. I wanna put some sort of a reggea beat to it kinda like Matisyahu but a little faster. I don't normally write like this because its a little too emo. Tell me what you think.
She makes me blind So i can't see
the oppurtunities that are around me
and i guaruntee that she'll make me go
crazy with envy
lies, secrets, controversey surrounding her
drawing me into a world
onley she can see
like a web of silk only the weaver believs
what it makes is true and right for her
so i try to speak up but only dowm
my words fall on the ears
of those who only want hoes
she just plows right through
my hopes my dreams
are crushed by her steamroller
of half truths
but she has a way
to make you belive a magic unseen
and the master witch can use her wand
to play tricks on your mind
make you think you have
something but when you
reach in your pocket you find yourself
broke and wanting more from her
she takes what you got chews it up and spits it out
uses youmanipulates
and cleats her way around the barriers of the rules
of love and everything
and leaves you asking where does it go
from here and where to I go
for more but theres is no more
she has the monopoly on your soul
but this is only a game to the weaver
she's got your soul you can't give it to no one else
She just keeps it bottled up
and lets it rot while the life of you
loks around but your still trapped
in the web and as though you dont know
the devil's got a hold of
your hear and soul and you ain't got no deal
ain't no song you can play and your still oblivious as to where
it's gone it's not somehting you can
see or hear but feel
it's around seek but you'll just find
that her claws are dug deep she won't let go
of the precious jewel just give up
go awway sit in that corner
and lay in the web
and from that web you'll see
that she draws in more
flies than you can count
your not the only sucker on her wall
she's got a ton of fools she's trapped and tricked
and you try to warn but they don't belive
till it's too late and they already handed over their soul
and now on her web you all sit
watching waiting for a chance to escape
but everytime you try
Medusa's eyes flicker
and our frozen there stuck still
and back on the shelf you go and wait
for your next chance but eventually
you all decide there is no way
to get away and stay in place
while she draws in a new batch of sheep
who belive they are the only ones in her world
but see the web and turn their tails but it's too late
the master hunter who thirves on those who try to survive
has snared and stopped the runaways
with the snap of a finger and the game is over
she wins by forfeit
thats it i quit shes too much
though i nkow I'll go back
'cause she'll break down my will to get out of her gaze
make me feel like the only one in the game
while she plays with the other players
she battin' 1000 records a million and 0
I know i'll go back its really sad
the pull she has
but she takes away your dignity
self-confidence and motivation to get away
i dont wanna play i give up give in and give away
whatever she wants
but lets end this charade
be honest here she dont like none of us schmucks
we try and fail and return to the endless cycle
Sorry its really long and no chorus or anything. Thoughts?
She makes me blind So i can't see
the oppurtunities that are around me
and i guaruntee that she'll make me go
crazy with envy
lies, secrets, controversey surrounding her
drawing me into a world
onley she can see
like a web of silk only the weaver believs
what it makes is true and right for her
so i try to speak up but only dowm
my words fall on the ears
of those who only want hoes
she just plows right through
my hopes my dreams
are crushed by her steamroller
of half truths
but she has a way
to make you belive a magic unseen
and the master witch can use her wand
to play tricks on your mind
make you think you have
something but when you
reach in your pocket you find yourself
broke and wanting more from her
she takes what you got chews it up and spits it out
uses youmanipulates
and cleats her way around the barriers of the rules
of love and everything
and leaves you asking where does it go
from here and where to I go
for more but theres is no more
she has the monopoly on your soul
but this is only a game to the weaver
she's got your soul you can't give it to no one else
She just keeps it bottled up
and lets it rot while the life of you
loks around but your still trapped
in the web and as though you dont know
the devil's got a hold of
your hear and soul and you ain't got no deal
ain't no song you can play and your still oblivious as to where
it's gone it's not somehting you can
see or hear but feel
it's around seek but you'll just find
that her claws are dug deep she won't let go
of the precious jewel just give up
go awway sit in that corner
and lay in the web
and from that web you'll see
that she draws in more
flies than you can count
your not the only sucker on her wall
she's got a ton of fools she's trapped and tricked
and you try to warn but they don't belive
till it's too late and they already handed over their soul
and now on her web you all sit
watching waiting for a chance to escape
but everytime you try
Medusa's eyes flicker
and our frozen there stuck still
and back on the shelf you go and wait
for your next chance but eventually
you all decide there is no way
to get away and stay in place
while she draws in a new batch of sheep
who belive they are the only ones in her world
but see the web and turn their tails but it's too late
the master hunter who thirves on those who try to survive
has snared and stopped the runaways
with the snap of a finger and the game is over
she wins by forfeit
thats it i quit shes too much
though i nkow I'll go back
'cause she'll break down my will to get out of her gaze
make me feel like the only one in the game
while she plays with the other players
she battin' 1000 records a million and 0
I know i'll go back its really sad
the pull she has
but she takes away your dignity
self-confidence and motivation to get away
i dont wanna play i give up give in and give away
whatever she wants
but lets end this charade
be honest here she dont like none of us schmucks
we try and fail and return to the endless cycle
Sorry its really long and no chorus or anything. Thoughts?