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Trueone1
01-04-2006, 11:54 AM
Lies in You.

I.
Tell me why everytime you lie
You say you want me
But when you get a chance your gone
So how am supposed to think?

Trying to be serious
You have no comprehension
Don't know whats goin on
So try to explain this one.

Chorus.
Why do you constantly go for guys all wrong
You go for the ones who treat you bad
Treat you like crap, is this what you want?
So I'll try to be the bad guy in this song.

II.
Do you like crying at night?
Do you like your pillow to drown your sorrow?
All your make-up staining what was the past.
Should you be the one in this?, no no no

Tellin you right from wrong
You don't listen, how does this change?
It doesn't so am I wasting time?
I guess I'll kick you to the curb, Right?

Chorus.

Bridge:
Never ever wanting to hurt you
But you listen next to never
So now it's good bye
Won't ever call you my baby.

Chorus.

drumass04
01-04-2006, 12:33 PM
Read the rules. 1 song a day.

I'll crit your first.

Trueone1
01-04-2006, 01:00 PM
oops, thanks for correcting me; I kind of just scanned over the rules like not spaming and all that junk, won't happen again.

firefromhell666
01-05-2006, 09:28 PM
prety decent imagery but i had a hard time getting into the flow of it, work on making it flow a bit better.