Sorry... >crit for crit<

[drumtoke]

This needs help, please crit

Sorry
this is hard im not sure ill stay
i hate you all but ill fake it anyway
this place is way to run down
your life is starting to turn around

move so fast, i wanna take it slow
no where to hide, nowhere to go
im sure ill find but im not sure at all
all i know is theres nothing that will break my fall

ch
Maybe next time we be brave
next time we'll do anything, i know
show the way
i fell through the floor
maybe next time we'll do something more