Seconds

[RHCPaddict]

This isn;t my best work, but I'd really like to improve it.

Seconds

Seconds to panic
In the land of lands
A killing fist
A leading hand
No reason to fight
Just another damned night
Eyes open wide just burning to cry
Flowers that bloom are meant to die.

Seconds to lie
In the land of lands
A hopeless tale
Of empty hands
No reason to fret
Just another night in paradise
Four corners of the sun
Smile the world, whats said is done.

Seconds to fake
In the land of lands
A compulsive liar
Slightly less then a man
No reason to laugh
Just another tastless joke
Hearts that break wont break your fall
Here we go, just another brick wall

[drumtoke]

not bad, last verse needs work

[RHCPaddict]

I was thinking just to cut it out...which is what I did.