toy soldiers (re-post)

[irishbasketcase]

ok well, this is a song i wrote ahwile ago, i posted it but then it was deleted coz i got banned but i think someone else might have posted it, im just trying to clear things up

toy soldiers

new stars falling
a broken sky
a perfect place
wheres your pride

keep us safe
turn on the light
shut the door
and tell a lie

take a chance to say goodbye
everyone wants a second life
ive got toy soldiers
but i have lost my smile
burning skin, just a child

come on eve
take a bite
it looks clean
a dirty knife

im asleep
im alive
im diseased
your always right

take a chance to say goodbye
everyone wants a second life
ive got toy soldiers
but i have lost my smile
burning skin, just a child



you can crit this openly, it has mixed meaning thats kinda of hard to explain, it came from different things that were going on in the world and different emotions i had about them

[irishbasketcase]

cum on

[irishbasketcase]

someone please crit this

[Pesnja]

My cousin's band is signed with Interscope records - hence they're professionals, and this sounds almost like a song they'd sing.

I don't mean it is one of their songs. I like it... Although isn't "Toy Soldiers" a title of an Eminem rap?

[irishbasketcase]

he has a song called like toy soldiers, which is a cover, but could you give me the lyrics to your cousins song

[Pesnja]

If I could find them. I've only heard a tid-bit of the song. They haven't quite released their first album. When they do I'll find it for ya. If I knew the title I'd just give you it. Go ahead and look around for his band's lyrics, if you want: Gods and Monsters is the band's name.