Girl (Beatles lawsuit)

[Nic__]

Girl

You're nothing but a winer

Nothing but a crier

Nothing but cheap imitation china

Girl

You're nothing but an attention seeker

You make peoples esteem weaker

By being bad to all the unpopular people

Girl

You follow all the trends

You curve around the bends

Soon this life will end

Woman

Now you have a job

Working in a fish and chip shop

Now you wish that you could stop, and go back.

Woman

Don't you wish you read those books

You wish you didn't overlook, your youth.

Now you don't have roof, over your head

Woman

You thought that it was cool

To not listen in school

You thought that popularity ruled

Girl

Dropping out in 3rd year

Now it bring a tear, to your eyes

Now you live in fear, for your life

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sorry about the song overload, im only gonna post 2.

[SixStringKing]

dont force your rhymes too much.. and the second stanza is pretty horrible.. NOT EVERYTHING NEEDS TO RHYME.. i never stress that enough on these boards.. haha try rewriting it.. annd taking some of your rhymes out or changing them to an imperfect rhyme instead

[nonamemadox]

i dont realy get the title. it could be good as either afast punk song or a slow blues song. both is good with me though.

[slickathenyou]

That would be Beastie Boys lawsuit perhaps?