Power Struggle

[CrashRiot]

What does it mean when you raise your glasses of wine?
Are you toasting to good health, good fortune, good times
But in the end, everything good must fall
so we're only toasting to our own demise

Chorus:
I can feel your anger, its in your veins
It drives your hatred, drives your rage
It gives you focus, it gives you power
Until you no longer, can feel anything

These empty walls cloud my mind
of less-than-satisfying images, driving me blind
If you don't like what you see, then why pay attention
or has sight become a new part of aggression?

Chorus

Bridge:
In order to conquer pain,
you must feel it time and time again
Fight until you win
or fight till the bitter end

Solo

Chorus

[CrashRiot]

lalala

[BlackVanillaSky]

Hmmm.

Honestly, it's kind of too dark for me. I'm more of an optimist, so this doesn't appeal as much to me. It's definately not bad, but it could use some work.

If you have the time, can you crit mine? http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?p=10941461#post10941461

[espf-250htd06]

the bridge is super powerful sounds like somthing i would like to come up with the rest of the song is kidna boring focus on the bridge and write the song around it and its power and youll have a good song, i can hear some nice guitar work coming in with this and some breakdownish type drum beats

[MidnightHysteria]

Oh, the clichés. Get them off me!


Is the chorus stolen from a star wars movie???? :confused: