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slickathenyou
01-01-2006, 02:00 PM
Intro
It's only one more day til
One more day til
One more day til
One more day til
(Fast snare drum)
Puberty ends

Verse 1
I'll be 18 tomorrow
Officially an adult
I'll probably leave the house
And maybe join a cult
I can smoke, I can't drink
Unless I live in a state
Where they allow that... but I don't

Verse 2
I'll be 18 tomorrow
Responsible for actions
Can't rely on parents
For bail or taxation
I can drive, I can't buy
Cigs for little guys
But I will anyway... for a price

Bridge
But I cant
Go back to school
Or hang by the pool
I gotta go get a job
So I can
Buy pizza hut
or other stuff
Thant I might want... it sucks

MPA = Communism
01-01-2006, 02:29 PM
The bridge could be better if you work on the rhythm.. There's somethin about the syllables that keeps it down.

irtehmitchell
01-02-2006, 06:25 PM
honostly, man to man i love silly fun pop punk songs and such, but this straight up sucks.

Littlejohn
01-02-2006, 06:44 PM
okay, I'm figuring that this is a joke and all, but come on. Your other songs are decent. Please just throw this away.

Kaden
01-02-2006, 07:01 PM
Oh look a joke.

haha.

nonamemadox
01-02-2006, 07:05 PM
meh
not bad i guess

slickathenyou
01-02-2006, 08:33 PM
You guys really think so? K, I'll work on it then file it away or use it as a filler song.