New idea for lyric game thing, any mods, check this out, tell me what you reckon

[Crimsonpunk]

Ok, it being 2006 and me being battered out of my skull, I have an idea for a new lyric game, a sort of freestyle thing, if you will. Anyone who wishes to join must post a song which they created as they typed it, and may take no longer than five minutes, every ten songs that are posted are put to vote like the lyrical changlenges, and winners for that segment are kept on a leader board. Obviously, there is no way to tell if the participants actualy wrote the song then and there within the limit, but I trust people on this board enough not to cheat, a victory without honour and the like. I'm gonna start this off, but as I said, i'm wasted, so don't expect much,
Ok, starting time 4:39 am 1/1/06

[Crimsonpunk]

Tonight I stared deep into mirrors,
Reflecting regrets, it tears away the past, and barely shimmers,
I am so torn away by evreything I have encountered,
A faltering design, mounting upon Loosening floorboards
I'm not content, but vengeance
Doesn't seem to match the penace
Lesened by your weak smile, and again, watered down drinks

There is not one of you
That awnsered me, when broke, I called
"What is the reason, you have dragged me here
A victim, to the dawn"

Ok, that's me, I finished about 10 seconds early, and this is probably going to be complete ****e when I read it back to myself.
Anyone else...

[DeadReligion]

The repetition exceeds everyone's needs
Now you've got to start over again, at square one,
The tine of a spear, stuck in my stomach,
The agonizing annoyance, the ugliest dance
A waltz or a polka, a red splash on a plank
On a boat, dark and dank, it goes, with the ebbs and flows
Of this daunting and haunting tide,
Drops of water, up in the air, come down like mortars
On a midnight battlefield, petty flashes of light, that end the life

[slickathenyou]

New Years Eve,
The ball dropped again
This has a double meaning for some people
But yet again
I'm dateless again
Kissing at midnight's not that simple

I ran around, talking to all the girls
Based on reactions I'd have better luck with a squirrel
My mouth moved without discipline
And that mace from that blonde gave me a rash on my skin

I know stealing kisses is bad
It just shows how desperate I am
But it's a government holiday and everybody's drunk
Maybe I can change my luck

Yea, I cheated. Couldn't write it in 5, so I wrote it in ten. Sorry.

[SixStringKing]

hmm there needs to be a set number of lines...or a max/minimum

[I Love Fat women]

passion pencil, fire flame
you're in, play the game
reiterate, devastate
emitionless, masturbate
change of tide, change of mind
we'll always, stay unkind

solution, illusion
salvation, damnation
different brain, still insane
speeding, standing still
progressing regression
middle age, world stage

nothing new under the sky

[Buhta]

I am here as you are there
Never leaving, dancing with glare
Slipped into my eyes and turned away
From you and from all the world at bay...

May my flame be with you all night
Over and over, twisting and turning
Tomorrow as together, all right
And we will, still, as one be burning

[CrazyBass30]

Same Old New Year

verse 1:

It's the new year baby
so let's start it out right
we'll forget all our problems
and let the sparks ignite

verse 2:

Let's write a new chapter
tear out a page or two
replace them with new ones
cause this year, it's only me and you

chorus:

There's many things I've done I shouldn't
And many that I should have done
This year not breaking your heart
Is my resolution.

Repeat on last time of chorus: (not breaking your heart is my resolution)

[Crimsonpunk]

Cool, I make that five entries including myself, slickathenyou, sorry dude, try to come up with a shorter one, but at least you didnt try to cheat. Five more and I'll go into voting

[I Love Fat women]

How about we make it five entries total per vote? Otherwise it'll take too much time for each competition as there isn't so much traffic on this forum...

[SubtleDagger]

Your "new idea" is basically the exact same thing as Lyrical Challenges minus the challenge of using a specific word.