Abandoned and Forgotten

[zypher2004]

This is the first song I ever wrote,
Te little parts in brackets (like this) are ment to be sung the second time around.

Abandoned and Forgotten
Your cry for help will not be heard,
Your death will not be mourned
Unless you.....
Stand on your own two feet
Don't lean on your half assed gods....
They have forgotten you.....
You shall forget them too
(Your demise is all that awaits you!)

You live a life of hatred and fear...
You fear the dark,
You never saw the light....
Your life is lived in fright
So you rely on your gods.....
To explain it away!

Your life will not change, Unless you....
Stand up on your own...
Independant of false beliefs,
Your gods have forgotten you...
You shall forget them too!

You have no remorse...
No mercy...
You've ruined the lives of so many....
Ruined so many familys...
Broken happy homes...
A concept to you that was never known.

Your gods have forgotten you,
Family forgot you too...

It caused an aberration...
A mental deformation.

[Instrumental Break]

Slaughter.....!

[Instrumental Break (cont...)]

Your living a hopeless life...
That ended long ago...
You live in the dark....
Outside of the light...
Your life is lived in fright...

Overburdened with all that you do...
Because your family abandonned and forgot you....

They left you for dead...
They forgot about you...

Your rage comes out in all that you do...

Your life ended long ago...

Abandonned and Forgotten by those who you loved.

[fingis]

This is the first song I ever wrote,
Te little parts in brackets (like this) are ment to be sung the second time around.

Abandoned and Forgotten
Your cry for help will not be ****ed,
Your **** will not be mourned
Unless you.suck.a.****....
Stand on your own two ****
Don't **** on your half assed gods....
They have forgotten you.....
You shall forget them too
(Your demise is all that awaits you!)

bang a bum.of hatred and fear...
You fear the penis,
in-your-ear....
Your life is lived in fright
****-a-dog-in-the-night.....
To explain it away!

Your life will not change, Unless you....
****-a-bum-and-say-godbless-you...
Independant of false beliefs,
always-boxers-before-briefs...
You shall forget them too!

You have no remorse...
No mercy...
i-met-a-guy-named-frank-percy....
Ruined so many familys...
****'ed-a-bum-hard...
A concept to you that was never known.

Your gods have forgotten you,
i-have-to-take-a-poo...

It caused an insemination...
A mental poooheadnation.

[poopy-caw-caw Break]
****_MY_BUMM.....!

[poopy-caw-caw Break (cunt...)]

Your living a hapless life...
uve-got-an-ugly-wife...
You live in the dark....
you-look-like-a-nark...
Your life is lived in sexxx...

overdone-this-song-was...
Because your family abandonned and forgot your-dink....

They left you for dead...
They forgot about you-bed...

Your rape comes out in all that you do...

Your life ended long agoo...

oh-wait-relief...u-took-a-poo

Abandonned and Forgotten by those who you loved.

mhm-i-like-what-i-did-here:chug:

[MidnightHysteria]

It feels quite repetitive, as though you're not really adding any new information after the first stanza or two. This, along with the fact that the topic is so generic, makes it kinda dull. Still, it's not bad for a first song.

[slickathenyou]

Lol... fingis that was great...

[drumtoke]

your song needs to be played loud!