Don't cry my friend : Emo song I think. :p

[Laetus]

Old song from 2000 - remade.. (And will be remade again)

Tools:
Line 6 UX1 Toneport
Shure SM58 microphone
Ibanez RT150 guitar
FruityLoops Studio 5
Cool Edit Pro 2.0

Note:
I am out of tune in the vocals here and there.. I know - the song will be re-made again to correct that.. I just can't be bothered to begin with my re-making project till late December/January. (And they will be perfect.. Or as perfect a home-recording can be!)

Link:
http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=3244251&q=hi

[GeorgeHarrison]

Dude, i cant tell what you are saying. Sorry if this is rude but, it seems that your voice sounds too "Whiney".

Sorry.

[Pale-Folklore]

AHAHA latetus you're the one who just posted that black metal song!

ROFL!

[experi_metal]

AHAHA latetus you're the one who just posted that black metal song!

ROFL!

i thought i was the one that posted the black metal songs :confused:

[Laetus]

AHAHA latetus you're the one who just posted that black metal song!

ROFL!

I can write all music..
I don't like to be one of those artists who can only do one thing. :)

I believe the metal song I posted is more death though. :p


GeorgeHarrison:
Whiney lol? First time I've ever been told that as a critic point. :) But it's an emo song.. Supossed to be whiney. :p

[The Musician]

It sounds like Eric Clapton + Paul McCartney for some reason, I like it, but I do agree that you're voice does sound weird at some parts, too congested...that's not the right word I'm looking for, but along those lines. Keep up the good work.

[Surgicalgod]

I like tune....still needs major work on vocals though. Keep up the good work.

[psychodelicmonkeyfromspace]

I like it, vocals just need to be a little clearer, seems like you can hit all the notes though. Try just pronouncing them all preperly, sometimes it sounds stupid, but if you balance it right it can sound cool.

[Fred kennedy]

I'm gonna have to agree with everyone else and say Music's good, vocals neeed improvement though. Pretty good song.

[Laetus]

Maybe I should attempt to sing it at a lower vocal tone?

[SugarCoatedSour]

Maybe you should try and make that stuff sound more like....whats that word....good!. Ya some of that should jazz it up. Maybe try focusing on a more finite idea and working around it when writing music because that just sounds like a random half-assed song...it sounds like you making music just for the sake of hearing some noise...try making the music itself sound good and then just let the vocals naturally adapt.

[Laetus]

Maybe you should try and make that stuff sound more like....whats that word....good!. Ya some of that should jazz it up. Maybe try focusing on a more finite idea and working around it when writing music because that just sounds like a random half-assed song...it sounds like you making music just for the sake of hearing some noise...try making the music itself sound good and then just let the vocals naturally adapt.

Heh.. It's not just a song made for the pure hell of it. :p
It's written in dedication to a friend who had some problems in his real life and I wanted to cheer him, back in 1999 or 2000 - forgot.

Not half-assed at all. :)

However, I have changed its original built, which was a guitar doing the pattern the piano is playing for the first verse then switching to a struming pattern after the first chorus till end, no drums or bass on the original either. I will probably do the song again in its original design, though with a drum and bass. Probably getting the drum to drop in at the 2nd verse and out.
Also, make the vocals sound better. :p

The original was also done with a capo over the 2nd fret, which made it be in F and not D as this one is.