The Sunshine - Acoustic

[TheWoodenSlug]

Ok so heres a song I've just recorded. It was put together fairly quickly as it is only intended to be a rough draft to show the other guys, but I think it came up alright. Let me know what you think.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=449029

Thank you for your time.

[Happy_Squirrel]

I liked it. I thought the vocal melody in the chorus was especially nice. I think this song would sound better if you could add some other instrumentation. but it sounds good on its own too.

[silverburst9]

that was cool, you pulled it off pretty smooth. but it needs bongos..lol

[carpediem12]

I like it, acoustic and vocals sounded very good. I dont like your attack for notes in your vocals that much. maybe its just my taste... but other than that:thumb:

[spongebath01]

It sounds pretty good but there is already another band called the Sunshine... And they are relatively well known in the indie scene. Sorry...

[TheWoodenSlug]

Thanks alot guys/gals. I know what you mean when you say it needs more instrumentation. I'll get the other guys (drummer, bassist, other guitarist/keyboardist) to have a crack at it (especially the chorus). Thanks again for the feedback.

P.S spongebath01 how do you know I'm not from the band The Sunshine that you know and love? Just kidding, but seriously it's the song that's called The Sunshine, not the band. Thanks again.

[Laetus]

Liked the song.

Vocals:
However, you need to work on your S' and T's when singing. An s that goes sssccchhhhhh for too long doesn't sound well, and the teh sound of the t has the same effect.
It's all about technique though, and I ain't to good at it myself either. :)