Nirvanainbloom190
12-07-2005, 08:36 PM
This is a song Me and my band wrote. this song doesnt exactly fit if you try to read as a poem but it sounds good with the music. Tell me what you think too PLEASE.
Ill tell you a story about a boy named Ness
He walked in town and found a mess
He got in fights with everyone
He always used his toy air-gun
Oh____, How can he save the town of Onett
Oh____, Hes reluctant he can do it
Oh____, All his foes are out to get him
Oh____, However will he hope to Beat them
Spiteful Crow and Coil Snake
Runaway dog and a guy named Frank
These are some of hi enemies
Ness wont you defeat them please
Will his journey ever end
As time goes by he will win
Hell fight and fight anll day and night
Hell fight and fight with all his might
Thats the story about Ness
He wan the fight and cleaned his mess
Ness is in the hall of fame
Because he finaly beat the game
Ill tell you a story about a boy named Ness
He walked in town and found a mess
He got in fights with everyone
He always used his toy air-gun
Oh____, How can he save the town of Onett
Oh____, Hes reluctant he can do it
Oh____, All his foes are out to get him
Oh____, However will he hope to Beat them
Spiteful Crow and Coil Snake
Runaway dog and a guy named Frank
These are some of hi enemies
Ness wont you defeat them please
Will his journey ever end
As time goes by he will win
Hell fight and fight anll day and night
Hell fight and fight with all his might
Thats the story about Ness
He wan the fight and cleaned his mess
Ness is in the hall of fame
Because he finaly beat the game